Ptooey & Loogie - The Mommy of All Hiccups, early pencil draft

My college chum Cheese Hasselberger publishes House of Twelve comics. He said I could contribute something to their upcoming kids' anthology, so I'm working on a 4-page Ptooey and Loogie story. Here it is in progress (click each page to enlarge) --





I plan to tweak the drawings a bit more, add gutters between the panels, and ink it all nice-like. And I may change out some of the hiccup cure gags in the first half of page 2.